I learned that if we grow our own food we don't need to buy fruit and we can save money for the school.
First I drew up a plan, I grouped my ideas then I wrote them down into sentences and then I published.
Maybe you can try this in your school.
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Hey Johann,
ReplyDeleteI was pretty convinced by your writing because I could see you using reasons to back up your ideas. I also knew what was going to happen in your writing because your introduction helped guide me. Next time perhaps you want to help support your ideas with some statistics (facts with numbers).